Monday, September 9, 2013

Sensory Details

Sensory details add a lot of flavors to a piece of writing. I, myself, have worked on it and found great differences in terms of imagining. With the sensory details, a writer can maximize one's memory and pass it onto the readers. It is one of most efficient ways of expressing the writer's feeling.

These are the examples of five sense category but it's not limited to. Sometimes people want to put the 6th sense: sensing. I like to use the 6th sense more than any other senses. It is something unexplainable but somehow rational. Personally I believe that the 6th sense is when the writer's style comes out.

Event
A day at the beach
Visual details
Children playing in the sand
People lying on the beach and swimming in the water
Sparkling sand with white-speckled shells
Water meeting the blue sky at the horizon
Lifeguard stand and hot dog stand
Sounds
Chatter and laughter of children
Parents and children talking
The lifeguard’s warming whistle
The lapping of the surf against the sand
The splashing of swimmers
Smells
Ocean air
Slight fishy smell
Whiff of roasting hot dogs
Scent of suntan lotion
Tastes
Salt water
Hot dogs
Feelings/ Textures
Heat of sun on back
Sweat, cool water, and towel on skin
Sand between toes



Photo: http://www.escapes.ca/blog/2012/08/30/3-reasons-how-group-travel-can-create-community-and-save-you-money/

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